Title:
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Author:
Cindy James
Cindy James
Julie Mannell 3:40 am (November 22, 2018)
I think this is a really solid shot. Very nice handling of the light and colors. As a multiple-spaces shot, Iād like to see a clearer visual path between the foreground and background. I know that moving the dining table to the left might not have been possible (heavy; floor scratches!) So wondering instead: If the camera were moved a little bit to the right (while still retaining enough fireplace to tell that story) and zoomed in a touch, maybe the dining chairs (2 instead of 3) on the right side could have been positioned in such a way as to open up a clearer path from the kitchen through to the living room? In PS, would probably remove the cone outside and the light streak on the fridge.
Kerry Bern 3:02 pm (November 22, 2018)
Agree with Julie. This is really a solid shot. Her comments of camera placement and staging are spot on. I also would have been inclined to move the white chair/couch to the right a bit so that the view to the fireplace is less obstructed. I also think that I would have made the room with the fireplace a bit darker to help pull the eye to the brighter far room.
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